Jack Johnson's National Guard Application

(( IC ))
Firstname : Jack
Lastname : Johnson
Date of Birth : 30/11/1988
About yourself ((Background Story)):-John was born in New York city. he was raised in the rich part of the town with his mother and father. his father was a police officer and his mother was an accountant, John had a good life until the age of 15. His father was shot and died before any help could arrive. His mother was murdered in her house while she was watching the tv.
John was lost and angered. He didn't know what to do. Some years later, he decided to move away from this townr. he had a friend in Los santos and decided to go visit him. He went there and lived in his friend's house. A bit later, John found a taxi job so he could make a bit of money. he was quite a good driver, but after some time he got bored and quit his job. he then decided that he could go apply at the national guard so he could defend his country.
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Firstname :Antoine
Lastname :Gaudet
Age : 18
Nationality : Quebec
Rate your english level : 2/10 Oraly and 8/10 at typing
Rate your roleplaying skills : 9/10
Do you have an prior military knowledge ? : Not realy.
If yes , explain :

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